Here's my first attempt at a Flash Fiction Horror story (under 666 words) called "Kentucky Moon", it was just published on Microhorror.com. Let me know what you think…Kentucky Moon
By Jimmy Calabrese
We pulled into the lot of the old gas station, the only car parked out front glowed with a ghostly hue from the moonlight. I reached into my jacket and pulled out my gun.
The robbery took a week to plan and only a second to fall apart. Hank was supposed to enter the gas station to clear out the customers while I waited, but as soon as he entered I heard the blast of his shotgun. I ran inside and found the clerk erupting blood like a volcano from a hole in his chest.
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Great story and cool site.
ReplyDeleteSurprised no one has commeneted yet.
Plan on writing anymore?
Thanks for the comment. I'm working on more of these flash fiction stories, they are fun.
ReplyDeleteVery cool! I dug it.
ReplyDeleteAh man that was good. It left me at the edge of my seat. You should totally write more.
ReplyDeleteThis falls into one of my favorite horror categories: the "moral" play. Some of the best horror fiction is firmly in this category (EC Comics and Stephen King's best works spring to mind), where the focus of the story is paying the price for their sins. It's great, because you see evil people getting their just rewards in a VERY gruesome way! Great job!
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Glad you guys liked it. I've been working on my grammar, I have several work books to touch up on the subject.
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